Sunday, 30 May 2010

New day (haiku).

I woke up today,
breath smelling like a soiled
arsehole - a new day.
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2 comments:

  1. old pajamas3 June 2010 at 02:18

    Robert,

    Channeling Ikkyu, are you? Nice piece. Suggestion; you don't need 'a new day'.....pajamas

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  2. old pajamas3 June 2010 at 02:21

    Robert,

    I woke up today :: breath smelling like a soiled arsehole

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